tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post8490512212022684447..comments2024-01-05T05:32:54.346-05:00Comments on S.A. Larsen, Award-winning author of middle grade & young adult fiction: INTERNAL CONFLICT CONTEST POSTEDS.A. Larsenッhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06241633272588383935noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-7095405923286483492010-05-14T13:23:31.521-04:002010-05-14T13:23:31.521-04:00Love the tension between the two of them! You'...Love the tension between the two of them! You're really good with dialogue.Bridge Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06687000732188023868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-34516761145663033662010-05-13T15:27:06.070-04:002010-05-13T15:27:06.070-04:00Ooohh! This is my kind of story!! Love the title b...Ooohh! This is my kind of story!! Love the title by the way and you have def mastered the use of powerful verbs...Keep it up!!angelarenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13639436719051155045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-22377646641876704312010-05-13T08:29:14.453-04:002010-05-13T08:29:14.453-04:00This was awesome! Poor Viktor. He wants her but ca...This was awesome! Poor Viktor. He wants her but can't have her. Classic perfect forbidden love:)Tina Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05914428134837892539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-37658584657186411332010-05-13T05:04:02.675-04:002010-05-13T05:04:02.675-04:00BRILLIANT!!!!!BRILLIANT!!!!!Ann Marie Wraighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14524746255813452836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-91250908916783656302010-05-12T19:06:40.006-04:002010-05-12T19:06:40.006-04:00I so want more of this.I so want more of this.Tarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09008153523366719973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-20733937145834149072010-05-12T18:57:46.079-04:002010-05-12T18:57:46.079-04:00Great entry for the blogfest. I really liked this ...Great entry for the blogfest. I really liked this one. :)sarahjayne smythehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02589820347348973092noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-44345528670173869322010-05-12T18:41:10.400-04:002010-05-12T18:41:10.400-04:00Woo hoo on the conflict! I'm reading so many t...Woo hoo on the conflict! I'm reading so many today, I feel conflicted! =)Carolyn V.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15456210036213016603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-74111062586409760292010-05-12T18:31:55.785-04:002010-05-12T18:31:55.785-04:00Nice submission! You have a cool writing style! I ...Nice submission! You have a cool writing style! I really enjoyed this! Oh and love your taste in music BTW ;)T.J. Carsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13916627399622909282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-23726342634516275282010-05-12T14:24:42.247-04:002010-05-12T14:24:42.247-04:00UUMMMMM PS. Just noticed your quotes up there on t...UUMMMMM PS. Just noticed your quotes up there on the right AAANNNDDDD Steven is my ultimate homeboy.Candylandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08956196611348299424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-73567765197940956242010-05-12T12:08:31.785-04:002010-05-12T12:08:31.785-04:00"Thanks for noticing my blunder and telling m..."Thanks for noticing my blunder and telling me. I went back and re-entered the Whoo-hoo contest, adding the entries and posting the notice in my post today. I'd already signed you up in my sidebar."<br /><br />No problem! I noticed, you're listed with 4 entries now :)<br /><br />"Great blog, by the way. Can't believe it took me so long to find you."<br /><br />Thank you! Likewise! Thanks to Candace :)Jessica Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10889900730906728317noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-12208990283328535622010-05-12T11:17:06.714-04:002010-05-12T11:17:06.714-04:00I feel stressed out just reading it! You did a fan...I feel stressed out just reading it! You did a fantastic job.Tanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10518718614911804428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-73887015506136921132010-05-12T10:27:56.351-04:002010-05-12T10:27:56.351-04:00I LOVE this story! NEVER EVER doubt it's not A...I LOVE this story! NEVER EVER doubt it's not AMAZING!!!!<br />xoxoCandylandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08956196611348299424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-17671775327008809072010-05-12T10:08:37.170-04:002010-05-12T10:08:37.170-04:00Wow! This is such a great story. I want to read...Wow! This is such a great story. I want to read more, that's for sure! The chemistry between Ana and Viktor is really steamy! <br /><br />I followed you from Julie Musil's blog and look forward to reading more about you. <br /><br />I'm a mom to four, too! My kids are 9, the twins are 5, and the "little boss" is 3. Hope to see you at my blog - Head in the Clouds. Have a great Humpday! ToryToryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12002374176500840411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-15170309436433795512010-05-12T08:40:35.517-04:002010-05-12T08:40:35.517-04:00This was fantastic! I'm always a sucker for an...This was fantastic! I'm always a sucker for anything related to music. I especially loved this line: 'His hand slipped off the volume button from frustrated perspiration. Each drop had her name on it.'<br /><br />PS, you do know that the Internal Blog Fest, and Blogging Idol Contest are two separate things right?Jessica Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10889900730906728317noreply@blogger.com