tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post1444083801773924852..comments2024-01-05T05:32:54.346-05:00Comments on S.A. Larsen, Award-winning author of middle grade & young adult fiction: First Impressions: Page OneS.A. Larsenッhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06241633272588383935noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-84424683580064757402011-09-12T04:58:53.928-04:002011-09-12T04:58:53.928-04:00Come to France! We have LOADS of gypsies! WOW! She...Come to France! We have LOADS of gypsies! WOW! Sheri, this query rocks, as does the one-liner. I'm impressed!Samantha Véranthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07446488761214047647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-13643702160654563572011-09-11T23:23:30.225-04:002011-09-11T23:23:30.225-04:00oh, man. I'm so behind and buried. And I misse...oh, man. I'm so behind and buried. And I missed all of this, but I will say that premise and query sound fantastic! What a fun book! I hope you got some great feedback. Good luck!!! :o) <3LTMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05239077455322030275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-24968241496789525262011-09-11T17:00:13.389-04:002011-09-11T17:00:13.389-04:00Your book sounds awesome! You have a great writing...Your book sounds awesome! You have a great writing style.<br /><br />I'm in your campaign group. It's great to meet you.<br /><br /><a href="http://www.kathiswritingnook.com/" rel="nofollow">Kathi</a><br>Kathi Oram Petersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11959149321213743448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-17092561086472218792011-09-11T15:30:44.904-04:002011-09-11T15:30:44.904-04:00That's a great query!
And what a great thing...That's a great query! <br /><br />And what a great thing Diane and Marcy are doing.Talli Rolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04780882465745107715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-2092614720139833702011-09-10T12:43:06.811-04:002011-09-10T12:43:06.811-04:00Hi, Sheri,
Wow, what a premise. This sounds amazi...Hi, Sheri,<br /><br />Wow, what a premise. This sounds amazing.... I want to read it! Off to Diane's blog....Michael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-22989160104373576452011-09-10T07:21:26.103-04:002011-09-10T07:21:26.103-04:00Hi, Nice to meet you, I am another from the writer...Hi, Nice to meet you, I am another from the writers Campaign. Love your up beat blog and you sound so energetic, how do you do it with 4 not so young teens around.....lol.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-37694389417510556182011-09-09T22:44:15.023-04:002011-09-09T22:44:15.023-04:00Wow! Thanks everyone. So encouraging to know that ...Wow! Thanks everyone. So encouraging to know that I can finally write a pitch and query. Haha.... Yay!! Now I just have to finish the book. :)S.A. Larsenッhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06241633272588383935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-74414897183134586382011-09-09T13:53:25.341-04:002011-09-09T13:53:25.341-04:00Already been and I'm excited for you and this ...Already been and I'm excited for you and this book! YAY!! If you change anything major about the beginning and want to workshop the first 100 words, send it to mine and Stina's wroskshop too!Christina Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01799776834213400246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-32391554795276420172011-09-09T12:40:56.605-04:002011-09-09T12:40:56.605-04:00I love it! It's sound like such a fun read and...I love it! It's sound like such a fun read and I love the voice too. :)Lydia Kanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00484415427764822386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-2723983740348403822011-09-09T12:27:03.097-04:002011-09-09T12:27:03.097-04:00Great one-line pitch and that query definitely wou...Great one-line pitch and that query definitely would have made me request pages! I love that Diane and Marcy are doing this. My critique sisters and I do something similar each month as well. Perhaps if enough of us start helping each other like this then more and more authors will start landing agents and publishing contracts!Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05130733681254163610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-9549051107521665782011-09-09T12:14:37.352-04:002011-09-09T12:14:37.352-04:00Sheri, I just came back from Dianne's blog and...Sheri, I just came back from Dianne's blog and I SO love the voice. There's no question that she has a gruff personality and she is so Gothic! I like her already and the cover is simply FABULOUS! <3Elizabeth Muellerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06028099814857743134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-50697631507981355922011-09-09T11:58:38.065-04:002011-09-09T11:58:38.065-04:00Hi, Sheri! You had me hooked at the logline! It so...Hi, Sheri! You had me hooked at the logline! It sounds fantastic and I <3 your query!<br /><br />You know, when you buy a Dodge Durango, it's interesting all the other Durangos you see driving around you. The same it is with the genre we write.<br /><br />I've written a witchy book Darkspell, and now I'm seeing witch books. It's great and validates the fact that this is certainly meant to be!<br /><br />Btw, I love how your title gives you room for a series!<br /><br />Heading over to Marcy and Dianne's blogs now.<br /><br />Happy Friday!<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://elizabethmueller.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">♥.•*¨Elizabeth¨*•.♥</a><br><br />Can Alex save Winter from the darkness that hunts her?<br><br />YA Paranormal Romance, <a href="http://www.authorelizabethmueller.com/" rel="nofollow"><i>Darkspell</i></a> coming fall of 2011!<br>Elizabeth Muellerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06028099814857743134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-15339502808105157682011-09-09T11:28:10.698-04:002011-09-09T11:28:10.698-04:00Woohoo! Sounds so awesome! Good luck!Woohoo! Sounds so awesome! Good luck!Carolyn Vhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03780443388339294502noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-68006611864853157032011-09-09T11:17:12.455-04:002011-09-09T11:17:12.455-04:00Thanks, Ibdiamond. A reaction like that is encoura...Thanks, Ibdiamond. A reaction like that is encouraging!S.A. Larsenッhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06241633272588383935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-61149033024499334042011-09-09T11:00:21.983-04:002011-09-09T11:00:21.983-04:00Nice query! I'd totally want to read this.Nice query! I'd totally want to read this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-37654534392206546292011-09-09T10:21:19.877-04:002011-09-09T10:21:19.877-04:00Sounds cool. Just left a comment on Marcy's bl...Sounds cool. Just left a comment on Marcy's blog.E. Arroyohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06634213563563094173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-11712947744083896302011-09-09T08:17:03.308-04:002011-09-09T08:17:03.308-04:00whoa! that sounds INTENSE Sheri! Love it!whoa! that sounds INTENSE Sheri! Love it!Creepy Query Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18115161057496086972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-50806914293699421982011-09-09T08:06:24.754-04:002011-09-09T08:06:24.754-04:00Dianne's post is next on my dashboard. Off to ...Dianne's post is next on my dashboard. Off to check it out. Good luck with the querying. :DStinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11415189347501942340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-45147255914370868642011-09-09T07:04:08.106-04:002011-09-09T07:04:08.106-04:00Sounds pretty great and a hot topic! Best of luck!...Sounds pretty great and a hot topic! Best of luck!Laura Paulinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06503090226508079501noreply@blogger.com