tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post5815371618071978333..comments2024-01-05T05:32:54.346-05:00Comments on S.A. Larsen, Award-winning author of middle grade & young adult fiction: First Crusader Challenge: ShadowsS.A. Larsenッhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06241633272588383935noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-23171934379137651302011-09-13T20:44:40.346-04:002011-09-13T20:44:40.346-04:00Wow,so beautiful and sad! Loved "tears teeter...Wow,so beautiful and sad! Loved "tears teeter" too :)Coleen Patrickhttp://www.coleenpatrick.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-18250738470938415672011-09-13T20:20:36.883-04:002011-09-13T20:20:36.883-04:00Hello Sally. My name is Amy Jarecki and I'm vi...Hello Sally. My name is Amy Jarecki and I'm visiting your blog to inform you that your story has been short listed as one of the top two (out of 384 total entries), and you will advance to the semi finals! <br /><br />Let me be the first to congratulate you!!<br /><br />AmyAmy Jareckihttp://amyjarecki.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-45388153706040936272011-09-13T11:43:32.701-04:002011-09-13T11:43:32.701-04:00Wow, glitterword! I'm speechless and quite hum...Wow, glitterword! I'm speechless and quite humbled. Thank you!S.A. Larsenッhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06241633272588383935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-53779944040385178762011-09-13T11:19:37.911-04:002011-09-13T11:19:37.911-04:00I have judged your peice and it has qualified to m...I have judged your peice and it has qualified to move on to stage two. CONGRADS!<br />It is a beautiful peice. Touching, emotional, and filled with sadness. Really loved this one, Goodluck on round 2.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-78013041381916761262011-09-11T18:32:48.973-04:002011-09-11T18:32:48.973-04:00Thanks for sharing your flash. I love the sense of...Thanks for sharing your flash. I love the sense of anguish as she tries not to experience the memory, because she knows how painful it'll be when the memory passes.<br /><br />I'm looking forward to going down the campaign trail with you - I'm in your MG/YA campaigner group!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-50254970986239728962011-09-10T13:19:44.159-04:002011-09-10T13:19:44.159-04:00Enjoyed this. It's good to feel emotions--even...Enjoyed this. It's good to feel emotions--even the sad ones. My hubby thinks I'm crazy after the entries I've told him he had to read, but it's all about making people feel, right? Of course, I was worried there at the beginning about the, um, rating (PG-13, R). =) Great entry.Crystal Collierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03912469552483168148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-36090022882095095572011-09-10T12:29:23.100-04:002011-09-10T12:29:23.100-04:00Your story was cute, and sad, it made me think abo...Your story was cute, and sad, it made me think about my love. How it would be if he was just gone. Good job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-71062505680724263282011-09-10T10:13:49.293-04:002011-09-10T10:13:49.293-04:00Sad and touching. You wrote such great passion in...Sad and touching. You wrote such great passion in the beginning, too! ~ NadjaNadja Notarianihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01339595239944177531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-47272255738889825702011-09-09T23:16:13.143-04:002011-09-09T23:16:13.143-04:00Oh, wow. Great job.Oh, wow. Great job.Jessica Lovehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01382996481558671385noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-16897199863815849202011-09-09T12:20:57.620-04:002011-09-09T12:20:57.620-04:00Awwwww... so sad! Nicely written, though :)Awwwww... so sad! Nicely written, though :)1000th.monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16835988128285459745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-2503730365783764232011-09-08T20:25:51.699-04:002011-09-08T20:25:51.699-04:00Wow! This is POW-ER-FUL!!!!!!!Wow! This is POW-ER-FUL!!!!!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-42963341215344610982011-09-08T17:26:22.623-04:002011-09-08T17:26:22.623-04:00Nice! I could really feel the emotion in the piece...Nice! I could really feel the emotion in the piece. Beautiful.Elana Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05877856005992028912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-27005271481967971432011-09-08T10:46:29.631-04:002011-09-08T10:46:29.631-04:00wonderful writing! congrats on hitting all the cha...wonderful writing! congrats on hitting all the challenge marks.Jessie Harrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11581727105030086814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-3884319566268857902011-09-08T10:30:28.157-04:002011-09-08T10:30:28.157-04:00That was beautiful and so sad! I loved it!! I'...That was beautiful and so sad! I loved it!! I'm a new follower by the way :)Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02000569858548717605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-49744952443811671302011-09-07T10:57:44.955-04:002011-09-07T10:57:44.955-04:00Darn, I knew he was going to be dead and yet I sti...Darn, I knew he was going to be dead and yet I still hoped otherwise. Well done. Mine is #72Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-19221142955257806502011-09-07T10:56:27.695-04:002011-09-07T10:56:27.695-04:00Nice twist ending :) <3 from a newbie followerNice twist ending :) <3 from a newbie followerKelleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03237422917705115205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-642757120360798072011-09-07T10:03:03.482-04:002011-09-07T10:03:03.482-04:00awe- Loved this! So vivid and emotional. Great job...awe- Loved this! So vivid and emotional. Great job!Creepy Query Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18115161057496086972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-28315650026397725442011-09-06T23:13:52.582-04:002011-09-06T23:13:52.582-04:00So sad. That you made me feel emotion is a GOOD th...So sad. That you made me feel emotion is a GOOD thing. :)Alleged Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04869021184116123477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-2589942855980273312011-09-06T15:04:12.750-04:002011-09-06T15:04:12.750-04:00That's really sad. But I liked the imagery and...That's really sad. But I liked the imagery and everything.Sonia Lalhttp://storytreasury.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-66728537624086129072011-09-06T14:40:55.916-04:002011-09-06T14:40:55.916-04:00Very visceral; I kept wondering if he was there or...Very visceral; I kept wondering if he was there or not. Great hook!Will Burkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10158149526658590324noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-28440030724144226112011-09-06T12:51:28.395-04:002011-09-06T12:51:28.395-04:00So sad.So sad.Theresa Milsteinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03477761307315565259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-21395027382214935242011-09-06T12:18:37.911-04:002011-09-06T12:18:37.911-04:00Oh, that's really sad!Oh, that's really sad!Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-67188246722702355692011-09-06T11:59:20.306-04:002011-09-06T11:59:20.306-04:00OMG, my heart broke! This was so beautiful, the im...OMG, my heart broke! This was so beautiful, the imagery had me right there feeling it all, then dropped me off a cliff at the end. I. Loved. This.Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05130733681254163610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-49054982022684253302011-09-06T11:41:56.186-04:002011-09-06T11:41:56.186-04:00Wow! The ending was just incredible.Wow! The ending was just incredible.Nicole Zoltackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07464800543376449290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4513702670120363707.post-42436682832623503162011-09-06T10:42:46.267-04:002011-09-06T10:42:46.267-04:00Whoa. Great ending. Didn't see that coming. ;)...Whoa. Great ending. Didn't see that coming. ;)Carolyn Vhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03780443388339294502noreply@blogger.com